Sunday, May 8, 2011

Crime Story Part II

Did Part I leave you wanting more? Are you still on the edge of your seat?


Location: Question Room


'Hello Sally Mcgee,' says Corny, who is sitting on the opposite table to Sally.
Sally, who is wearing a beanie and scarf, says nothing back and glares at him.
'Right, let's get this thing rolling. Where were you the moment George Hamilton disappeared?'
'I was at the back of the house, having a smoke,' says Sally
'You're a bit young to smoke aren't you?' asks Corny
Sally shrugs.
'I hear you and the kid were not all friendly.'
'Do you blame me? Look at what he did to my hair while I was asleep babysitting that brat!'
Sally takes off her beanie to reveal a very multicoloured, resembling the colours you would see on a clown wig. Corny tries very hard not to laugh but fails. Sally says a swear word to Corny to describe him.
'Oh my you have a very colourful language young lady, sniggers Corny
'I hated the kid alright? But not enough to kidnap or possibly murder him!' exclaims Sally

Location: The Lab
'Hello Nina, what results do you have for me?' Corny asks the very pretty forensic scientist, Nina.
'Glad you asked Corny,' says Nina 'you know that hankerchief you gave me?'
'Yeah'
'Well, the hankerchief had chloroform on it. So I'm guessing that's what the kidnapper used to get the kid to stop struggling,' says Nina very proudly.
'Great, and the fabric?'
'Well the fibres are very similar to the ones they use for the hospital gowns that they give to patients, in fact, I am pretty sure they are from the hospital' says Nina
'Interesting, very interesting. And the blood?'
'I found out it was AB positive. I haven't gotten round to the stain yet, but I promise you I'll find out in about an hour,'
'Okay thanks Nina. I know I can always count on you,' says Corny and then blushes.

2 comments:

  1. How can this masterpiece not have comments?! I am enjoying this. I AM ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT DAMN IT.

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  2. thank you!! omg i knows how amazing is it

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