Crime Story Part V

Are you ready to see the dramatic conclusion of this story? If you've come this far into the story I commend you for go through this really embarrassing piece of work of past me. So here it is the last installment of Crime Story: The Case of the Missing Boy (really creative title there)


Location: Nuclear Power Plant
Corny creeps through the back door of the power plant to find even more doors. With his gun ready, he knocks don every door with his boot until he hears a faint cry. He follows the voice until it leads him to the end of the corridor. At the end of the corridor is a door. Corny turns the handle but the door is locked. With one almighty push with his body, the door opens. Corny turns on his flashlight onto George's face. George, who looks undernourished, looks very happy to see Corny.
'Everything is going to be fine, I'm here to help. Are you okay George?' says Corny in a soothing voice.
Behind them, they could hear footsteps gradually getting louder and louder.
'The man who calls himself your dad is gone now. Now there's nothing to stop you and your mum and I from becoming a family. All I have to do is bring her here too and then she'll learn to love me again. Isn't that grea-' the man who is called Harry stops talking when he sees Corny.
'Who are you? No no!' Harry covers his ears. Tears are streaming from his eyes.
'I'm Detective Corny. I'm taking your son back where he belongs,' says Corny
'No! You want me to stop me from being happy! This is my son. He belongs to me! I can have a family now!; says Harry, still crying and covers his ears.
'I understand you want to keep him but you can't, you're sick. You have to think about what is best for him. This is what a real father does,' says Corny trying to convince and calm Harry all at the same time.
'NO! NO! NO! The voices are telling me you are bad! You want to hurt my son!' Harry pulls out a knife from his pocket.
'Harry, you need help. Just let him go. You know, deep down, it is the right thing to do. Ignore the voices. Harry we can help you get better,' says Corny
Harry drops the knife and falls onto his hands and knees.

Location: Corny's Office
Chief comes into the room and for the first time in weeks, is smiling, practically laughing.
'You did it! Corny you clever boy,' says Chief and then reaches out to hug Corny.
'Chief, it was no biggie, really,' says Corny, modestly.
'You found the boy in one piece and captured an escaped patient in less than a week. Not to mention, scored a date with the beautiful and smart Nina Kent. Tell me, can it get any bigger than that?' (That's what she said) says Chief
'Aaww Chief,' says Corny, blushing a very red shade. Corny realised the Chief was right. Very right.

'Case Closed'

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I can not believe I gave this for my year 9 science teacher to read.